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Finished off the fifth chapter of the Ripper story; I'm trying to get this done and dusted as soon as possible, as Queenie plans to create a comic based on my story and I'm longing to see it. :)

This chapter concentrates firstly on the relationship between Johnny and Jenny, and also on Mary's murder. Who is the killer? Wait and see; everything will be tied up in the final chapter, which will be out as soon as I can get it typed up.

As I said in earlier chapters, this is tagged mature cuz of the nature of the theme. There is obviously going to be some violence and blood in a story about a serial killer.

The victims and the murderer are real people; I just dramatised their stories. Any extras are also made up by me. Jenny Lyons is my character. Johnny Wingraver belongs to Queenie.
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~Ladymiss777 Mar 12, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I had a feeling that Mary would die, Interestingly enough....I feel I may know who the killer may be, I'm probably wrong though.
Well written and executed as per usual but I'm just wandering why you didnt use as much of the olde English accent & street slang of the 1800's this time, anyway I loved it!
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~Kaori-Warbird Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, neither Jenny or Mary use it, so that's why. XD

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The most beautiful rose is cultivated in the blood of those that fall before me.

A soul needs a purpose to live... and so I concluded that my purpose was to kill everyone besides myself. I felt alive...
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Oh no, Mary died. Oh well, it gives the story a twist XD

I'm liking the character development as well :3
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~Kaori-Warbird Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wait and see... XD

The fate of the killer will be revealed, but maybe he won't be named. I haven't decided yet.

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The most beautiful rose is cultivated in the blood of those that fall before me.

A soul needs a purpose to live... and so I concluded that my purpose was to kill everyone besides myself. I felt alive...
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Johnny and Jenny are just so cute...

And you reveal an identity for the killer? We didn't do that in the rp

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"...the reason for Christmas, I now realize, is an excuse to tolerate snow!" ~Trans-Siberian Orchestra, 'What is Christmas?'
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